Dear students,
This month you will have to write a short story (no more than 100 words) in which you have to explain the worst holiday you have ever had in your whole life. If you are a lucky person and something like this has never happened to you, use your imagination, please!
For help you can consult page 8 in your workbook (exercise 1 in the Writing Section is a fantastic piece of information).
Read the stories of your partners and vote for the best ones, too! Justify why they are the best ones, ok?
Take care and write soon.
Your English teacher
I will explain the worst holiday I have ever had in my whole life.
ResponderEliminarI was 12 years old. My grandmother was very sick, and my family and me were very sad. Everyday we went to the hospital, my grandfather were very depressed and disquiet, he didn’t know what doing. My mother slept with her mother everyday in the hospital. My sister and me don’t know our mother, because she always is happy… the situation wasn't very agreeable. The days were passing and my holidays were ending. The 29th of August my grandmother dead. All was horrible.
By Alicia Gómez
Dear Alicia,
ResponderEliminarThat's really a sad story and, obviously the worst holidays in your life! It was normal that your grandfather "was" depressed and that he didn't know what "to do". It is also normal that you and your sister didn't recognise your mother as she was always a happy person and in those days she was really sad. Needless to say, the death of a relative is always a sad experience. Thanks a lot for sharing your experience with us. You have done the task very well. Your mark for this writing task is B+. Congratulations!! And see you in a couple of days!!!
My worst holidays were when I went to London.The first day was snowing so me and my family must be on the hotel all day because the streets were full of snow,and like the people couldn't walk by the streets because of the snow they decided to enter at the cafés, bars.. so it were collapsed.But on the afternoon we could go to the streets, and we did a snow war and also we made a snow figure.The next day we went to London eye and in the middle or the turn the ride stoped and we had to stay like four hours waiting for the firemen. Next three days I was ill because I ate something that felt bad to me.And last day we couldn't visit anything because we had to return to Barcelona.
ResponderEliminarMy worst holidays were seven months ago. We were in my apartament. It was summer with sun but suddenly became a week very terrible. The wearher was terrible. We had to stay at home all the day so We were very boring. The next day the weather was good but my brother was ill so we had to stay at home again. The next day we had to stay at home again becous I was ill. This two days were the worst in my life. The next week was good but the week before...well I think that never happen again.
ResponderEliminarWhat is this bro I want something for the school shut the fuck up
EliminarNow I'm going to explain my worst holiday. It happens on summer when I was 12 years old. I was staied alone in my house all the days because my parents were working and my young brother was staing in our town with my grandparents. I was very bored. One day my father decided to went to a campiste for a week. That week was horrible for me because rained a lot and I couldn't swim in a pool or in a beach, I couldn't do nothing.The next week I came to Barcelona.
ResponderEliminarIt was my worst holiday because I was so bored.
My worst holidays were very terrible for me and for my sister. There was in the village of my grandmother that it's name is Cogorderos. In summer when I was ten there weren't anybody at the village of my granthmother Amparo only her friends but all of they were old. I was very bored all the days except when we went to the river or when we went to a small town next door called Astorga, so I have to do homeworks or see the TV but in home was very hot so we don't know what to do. Then I falled with the bicicle and we have to go to the hospital because I gave a blow to the chest and then my sister had a very hard stomach ache.
ResponderEliminarIt's a very good and nice paragraph for me
Eliminar